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piggy
20th February 2006, 13:31
this is an extract from susans new novel after finally deciding to base her main character on keith.

We met in a secluded field, the sun nearly kissing the evening horizon.
The warm breeze was full of that earthy, musky scent that only those
fortunate enough to live outside the urban rat race know, and a quiet
whispering of leaves in the weeping willow overhead added the final touch to
the most romantic scene.


We lay there, both naked. I knew I had to have her, and have her now.
Without a word being spoken, I moved to a position of dominance. I could
feel instantly that this was what she was waiting for as she frantically
thrust her pelvis at my approaching organ. I moved slowly at first, Inch
byinch, until I was fully inside her. Then as the tension rose, we threw
caution to the wind and abandoned ourselves to the moment.
Although inexperienced, she approached every change of position with
enthusiasm, moaning with despair every time I withdrew to prevent myself
ending it all too soon. As the sexual tension heightened towards the
inevitable mind blowing climax, it was all I could do to hold out any
longer.


Finally, the moment we had been building up to was upon us, and passed all
too quickly.


Breathlessly we rolled together in the now damp grass. As the last deep
orange glow of the long setting sun melted into the darkness of approaching
night, we lay there still entwined in an amorous embrace. I kissed her long
and lovingly, and whispered reassuringly how good she had been. She tenderly and sensuously licked my inner ear then whispered, 'Baaa' and rejoined the flock.


This book is only for sale, at the moment, in New Zealand, Wales
and certain parts of North Yorkshire:D

bigcumba
20th February 2006, 20:36
That's no book extract, you nicked that from my online CV :D

susanwells
20th February 2006, 23:18
.. er .. don`t call us...:yikes:

mathare
20th February 2006, 23:50
Why is a publisher saying that to Sparky? :doh

Merlin
21st February 2006, 00:45
Why is a publisher saying that to Sparky? :doh

Freudian Slip

sparkyminer
21st February 2006, 07:22
.. er .. don`t call us...:yikes:
She loves me really..................:D

Win2Win
21st February 2006, 09:22
"Piggy and Sparky sitting in a tree.........."

Fadetoblack
21st February 2006, 12:38
f.i.s.t.i.n.......no that's just rude. I really have to stop lowering the tone of these threads.